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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:59 am

depends on your story. I wrote a poem for my friend (about her book), I can't rlly explain how it's like, but maybe you could get some idea from there?

I just wrote it based on how i felt.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:49 am

Hmm, thanks anyway. You know what? Screw that! I'm going to write poems again XD
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:50 am

lol. stories are tedious. because i spend a lot of time editing instead of writing it.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:53 am

hahaha, I don't spend time editing it as much as I do writing it. Although I'm not really good in grammars.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:01 am

can see that ><

Well, i'm too much of a perfectionist... i can edit several rounds and still be able to find fault in my writing... still be able to 'improve' on my existing writing.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:06 am

Malaysian English standards are not really that high, the teachers are also quite...lacking in that field, that's why sometimes I can't do it straight.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:15 am

well it's okay i suppose. there's something you're good at... like that in china...

well in singapore, we're just average in everything... we learn but not master.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:34 am

Yeah, sometimes being average is enough. Hey! A good poem inspiration.
That's just me, trying to get inspiration from everything but ended up being cluelss, haha.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:35 am

Inane

My words are scattered
Rearranging them seemed pointless
For my mind is jumbled
I am clueless

My mind could no longer sustain
The long hours of distress
The need to rearrange
The order of things

Where I start
It’s pieces I collect
Broken to tiny bits
I slumped back
What’s the need?

I closed my eyes
My tears dropped by
I’m tired
Please just let me die…
I deeply sighed

I opened my eyes
Thoughts pushed aside
Now that I’ve cried
I smiled….
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:24 pm

Lol. 'Now that i've cried, I smiled'... What a cliché. really. That's not what happens. When you cry, the grief seeps deeper, the agony sinks lower.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 12:30 am

I meant it to come out as, a foced smile you know. I do that all the time, after I cried, I will look back and think of all the stupid reasons for why I cried, and in the end, I sorta smiled. Weird.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:12 am

I don't know. I hope this doesn't offend you... But that's what I perceive as running away, because that's me. I'm runner, and I do things like that. Weak, fragile, useless... incompetent...
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:15 am

I'm sorry but I don't really get what you meant.. ;p
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:22 am

saying you're 'looking back at all the stupid things you cry at' erm.. they weren't stupid, aren't stupid. You're just running away from reality. You know how much it hurts, but you chose to give a wry smile, hoping to make yourself feel better. Obviously, OBVIOUSLY, it isn't. Because you know how it felt, and it stays. and the only way is to face it and overcome it.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 3:59 am

Now I see it. Yes, it's true in some sort, and the feeling of despair is the hardest to forget, but what if it's just yourself being a brat? What if it's just you being oversensitive? And you're just overthinking things where everything is just that simple? That's why I called myself stupid sometimes:)

I like the way you put things into perspective, it's very perceptional (lol, is there such word ;p)
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 4:07 am

and what makes you over thinking? 'trust'.

Trust is something that is so irritating. really. I don't see why we all understand what it is, but we still can't grapple it at all...

but being oversensitive... they say it's part of your personality. well it is, but oversensitivity can be overcome. also, you can BECOME oversensitive... when certain things happen... and it sums up to the single word, the simple but confusing word, 'trust'.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 4:36 am

Do you know how much I have time trusting people?
I would trust strangers more than the people I know, because when I told a stranger something, they can spread it to the world but it will end up being forgotten. Now, with someone I know, it would be a forever kind of gossip.
Trust...so overrated.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 4:46 am

haha. you're saying everything is overrated lol. ><
at first it was the word 'love', now it's this lol.

But true though, it's quite overrated... some who listen to what i want to say (which i end up not saying a lot), they just say, you've to try to trust. Believe them... even if it hurts? hai, even if it hurts. even if you know you're bound to fall? hai, even if you know you're bound to fall. Even when you're the only one giving in your all to that relationship (friendship)? hai, even when you're the only one giving your all... But why? But why should I... when all these are laid out so clearly before me? because, because you're bound to have it returned one day... What goes around comes around.

Sounds familiar to you? Well, it is to me...

i guess i've been hurt to the extent that i don't know what 'pain' is anymore... I only feel the mellow vacuum feeling... there's no pain anymore... it's just emptiness... just just... It feels of something, but that something can't make me tear nor smile.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 5:10 am

Yes, love, trust, it's overrated, at least to me.
Yes, I have been told I love you a lot of time, in fact it didn't matter, I can tell you I love you here too, haha, and I do mean it, but to me love has so many different catogories. If I tell you I love you, it's because I love being your friend, I love having you around and I would have meant it, besides I've known you for at least quite some time, XD. But I rolled my eyes whenever two complete strangers who bumped across one another and just talked parted with I love yous. 360 degrees in fact.
Trust....I fear....To have your heart presented to a person wholly, naked, that's a terrifying thought, they could use it against us and what do we get? Besides being betrayed, hurt, and feel the pain? What you say I will not defy, because that's my fears as well. What goes around comes around:) But I'm being optimistic, I am hoping for the day I could finally give my trust to someone, fully.
Oh, the reason why I fear of trusting is also because I don;t think the world is as simple or as fantastical as fairy tales, I love reading, because it's an escapeland for me. In the books, it ended perfectly, predictably. Reality....scoffed.

I'm sorry that you felt that way, but don't let that take away the smile from your face, you just have to search for it again. When I smile, I forget whatever pain, but when I do cry, all the pain comes rushing back, and I try to push it away, because...well...I always reminded myself that I am being oversensitive, I will try to restrain, because I feel stupid when I cry, very stupid. What goes around comes around eh?

For the record, I want to hear your opinion, are emotions a gift?
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 5:28 am

gift? it's a gift to every living thing, or maybe not?

Well i'd very much like to say it is, but well.. is it?

gift for we can appreciate. not so because we get hurt?

Quite simple. but emotions is something so simple yet so complicated.

So to me it is. Because it's so complicated, it makes us work towards understanding it.

actually emotions such as happy and sad, they all lie on a common continuum. and there's no way to say which is better, because one cannot exist without the other.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 5:30 am

That my friend, is what I see emotions as.
Neither could exist without the other. They must coexist, and that is what makes is appreciate them more.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 5:42 am

but why is 'sadness' so bad? they say 'death' is gloomy, is sad, is depresing.. but 'death' is actually 'rebirth'. isn't that what games teach us? 'respawning'?
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 6:02 am

haha
death leads to reincarnation, karma I suppose.
My dad laughed in my grandfather's funeral because he believed that he would want him to, rejoice for his departure and not grieve. But imo, sadness, mourning, grieveing is a way to remember someone, the connection runs deeper because when you broke down, you feel, you care for that certain someone, and felt the sudden loss that will not return forever. I fear of not seeing the ones I love, ever...But do remember, we can't grieve forever.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 6:08 am

reincarnation. if there's such a thing, why be sad? be grateful that he can leave the present problems and come again anew.
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PostSubject: Re: Trying my luck at poems....   Sat Jan 01, 2011 6:25 am

But you might never know....
We might be incarnated into something non-human. (which btw, I think my dog is..was a human. She acts like a human! I didn;t even have to train her and she was like...extra intelligent, not to be bragging, but I was wondering....)

Anyway, my point it, we might still feel the loss because we wouldn't know...
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