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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:00 pm | |
| At first I read condoms, But it sounded a bit political to me, IDK....and the weird thing is, the teacher confiscated my phone rhymed with the poem, haha | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Aug 19, 2011 11:01 am | |
| it does? O.O
It was a random write btw. i just wrote to let the fume out. >< | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:55 am | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Aug 22, 2011 6:59 am | |
| you should update yours too (: | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:52 am | |
| Haha, I'm planning to, in fact you just read my mind!
AND I just finished EXAMS TODAY! | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Sep 16, 2011 7:44 am | |
| erm, that's a good thing, but i suppose i'm a little late to know it now? ahha. quite dead here (as in the poetry section), without our voices which livens the pages and brings tuneless melodies into the mind, as we manipulate mankind who happen to stumble upon this silent and distant place of the heart to be dramatized by our alluring scents -- words that drift between lines and rearrange themselves before their very eyes, to confuse and haze, yet clean and clear minds. Alright, enough of my excessive notes upon touch-down here again, and time for the new write. endless edge
Momentarily, a sense of rejoice. as if freed, but empty once passed. Ticked away, seconds, minutes, and hours more to go. Seeking forever, the tomorrow a soul yearns. no, not, nothing, Anymore. sit, squad, stand up, Get moving. No more time to waste, precious is life... so to taste, so to enjoy, so to savour... so to find oneself-- of all the truth revealed, one buried deep below, MY ONLY DESIRE. ~Ger. | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:37 am | |
| I have to agree with you on that, in fact the site was quite slow moving, no one sticks around that much anymore, so I'm glad to hear from you:)
I have been longing for your poem, it has been such a long time since I was inspired by words again.
Endless edge:
of all the truth revealed, one buried deep below, MY ONLY DESIRE.
I don't really understand how this verse fit into the point of the poem, would you mind if I ask you to enlighten me? I thought the first few lines was brilliant, it gave me the impression of free falling thus endless edge but I was confused by the last three lines. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:45 pm | |
| Just to give you some BI, because that's all i can give now. I don't quite know how to explain.
So I was watching dramas. trying to relief my stress. happy I was! but momentarily. it left me empty immediately after. and I got angry with myself for having wasted so many of my PRECIOUS hours watching people act. yea, like i can't do that (okay i can't, but i will be able to one day... if i try).
so to find oneself, thus for me, i have hidden my desires of finding myself by wasting my life watching drama. and being entertained momentarily. My only desire is to be above the world. Yes, what a hilariously unbelievable and unattainable thing to say. yes, that's what it's my desires, and that's why i dream, and that's why I BELIEVE.
I believe that a man achieves what he desires when he believes in what he dreams. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:47 pm | |
| believed desire
brief as the collique night, a sense of fervor and rejoice, but washed clean immediately after.
infuriation! internal combustion charred life of being, unconceivable to callow minds.
yearned and still ongoing of a breathing but barren living, desiring to be beyond, above, leading life to the fullest and to leave living. ~Ger. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Tue Sep 20, 2011 3:28 am | |
| Dilemma
If study groups equate booze friends, then choices of working partners are no more, and grades must have aquaintances so!
Thus do we select with care and wit, to whom we stay loyal and committed, and participate whole-heartedly.
Nay shall we work for friendship, but with whom can serve us better, and encourage us to return their favours.
Why should we be put down by people for such acts of rightful actions, just because it will be unfair to others?
And so, to whom is it fine, or who is to choose it outrageous, and whom will find it just enough to be fair?
Quick-witted choice of the mind, or a stead-fast decision by heart -- the very question in need of our perceptions. ~Ger. | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Thu Sep 22, 2011 5:14 am | |
| Ahh, now it made more sense. I am once again swept away by your brilliance:) It is a new experience to be inside your mind, haha... cheesy? | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Sep 24, 2011 12:39 am | |
| how? I mean, i'm just as normal as everyone as everyone else. whatever i write, is probably what you/ others have gone through at one point of their life. somewhere, sometime, somehow. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:37 pm | |
| And Now I Die
Silence quietening down, blackness enveloping roun', Fear penetrates skin, more than enmity that diffuses out. Emptiness aggravates... deeper, further, darker, I am but gone away... Into the dying light of the twinkling stars...
Like them, I'm but a ball of fire that's slowly dwindling in brightness, as I devour myself... to bring forth light, that serves no purpose... The nameless many, forsaken, forgotten. ~Ger. | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Thu Sep 29, 2011 11:14 am | |
| everyone might lead different lifestyle, but they have different mind, that's what made human different:)
You know, it was a coincidence that I read a book called Before I die and you wrote this poem... | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:48 am | |
| what is in that story? I haven't heard of it before.
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:52 pm | |
| Anorexia
The perfect shape she only desires. Already 38 at 168, yet fats doth she squeeze.
'Make not yourself a weapon,' her lover whispers, 'for you aren't my spaniel, but a pillow filling I.'
Not long before she lay remorseful in bed, watching her beloved only weeping in dreams. ~Ger.
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:20 am | |
| It's more of a verse novel, have you heard of a verse novel? I find them straightforward and addictive.
It's a story about a dying girl doing all the things she wants to die before she dies. I cried like a baby:P
Anorexia - I am always interested in anything regarding Anorexia, I find this an interesting topic:) And the last verse caught me ~.~ Nothing hurt most than seeing your love ones suffer.
Ger..... O'levels is in exactly one month. Freaking out. Freaking out. Freaking Out.
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Oct 14, 2011 3:43 am | |
| Guess what...? Mine's the week after next. | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Oct 14, 2011 5:08 am | |
| Damn, that's super close! How long will yours take? | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Oct 14, 2011 7:16 am | |
| will be over in about a month's time. exactly one month starting tmr. | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Oct 15, 2011 9:40 am | |
| Ahhh! Good luck then! May all the luck be with you! | |
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Katie-la Being Chosen by a Cat
Join date : 2010-10-17
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:20 pm | |
| Guys! What's happened? We've let the Lit Sect. die!!! =,'[ Do either of you guys have a Facebook or something? We're losing touch!! PX
I haven't talked to either of you in forever! I keep on getting too busy to do anything anymore. =/ | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:45 am | |
| nah, i just came back from examinations. got a haiku to share: No Longer -Dreamer
Warped within tensions, distances closeness between as time swallows ties.
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:53 am | |
| Murky Waters -Dreamer
Skylines fade as sky darkens, here sits I as time passes, lost in a boulevard of remembrance, as I embrace that which is left of all I was once so clear of.
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Nov 14, 2011 2:00 am | |
| My Island Home -Dreamer
Black checkers behind glass, able to prevent accidents but not men who dream of flying.
Before these metal grills I stand, wind whipping hair and rain into the parted lips of my agape mouth.
I feel and all that I do feel, is but the beauty of the sea, that is so far yet so close to me. | |
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