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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Nov 14, 2011 2:08 am | |
| alright, just a side-note, all these poems I'm making or have made, actually originated from here. so if you see a lot today, it isn't because i wrote a lot back then. I don't have any more in my 'bank' of poetry. It only went up to like page 11 or something around there.
so yes, all these are somewhat impromptu. so what am I driving at? This: My gravest apologies if there are a lot of posts at one shot (almost like a spam) and I'll greatly appreciate if you all could kindly review each poem as you read them (: Also, sorry of the quality is a little screwed. cause i have a lot of overwhelming emotions, but not exactly knowing how to express them. so I'm just picking up my surroundings and speaking of them as I feel how they are like. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Nov 14, 2011 2:12 am | |
| Let It Out -Dreamer
Greyness spreading over, darkness permeating light. The once fervour brightness, now faded behind wetness. Somewhere, a Gumiho, is howling in agony.... Even non-humans weap | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Nov 14, 2011 2:20 am | |
| It's a Strength -Dreamer
If tears spell weakness, why do we always get over pain after crying?
If tears were for women, why were all humans blessed with such a gift?
If tears meant exposing oneself, why is it that only mankind have the ability to weep?
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Katie-la Being Chosen by a Cat
Join date : 2010-10-17
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:46 pm | |
| My Island Home
i absolutely loved this. I feel some sort of desperation coming from her, as she stands. It's very raw and emotional, I believe. But it's contained so neatly. I did enjoy this one the most of what I've read so far. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:48 pm | |
| Thank you (: I have no idea what I wanted to speak of either. Just a vaguely conveyed emotion i suppose. I was looking out of the window at the overcast skies... has been like that all day, all week, all month... many not all month, but since the end of my exams on monday. everyday was like that. grey, overcast, dull, but still having light. it's bright enough to do work, but dark enough to hint the arrival of rain. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:41 am | |
| The black, the white, and the transparent -Dreamer
From beneath the green were brick-red earth retrieved, mounting hills beside a uniformed rectangle.
Slowly lowered into it, an elaborately designed box, in which an old carcass laid, silent, and very much asleep.
Years of negligence brought forth regrets, alongside the heaviness of the parade, agony finally permeates the suited man.
And doh~ here doth she come! Swish-swosh, the heavily embroidered ends in the wind, weeping away her happy smiles that love should hold, held by her beloved, in a muddied wedding dress.
Light beckoning it to step within, A single tear of relief gives way as it fades, Swallowed by the brightness unseen to human eyes.
A/N: This poem is clearly about a funeral, poorly done i believe. The images aren't original. I got them from 'Ghost Whisperer' (television series). This image has been stuck in my mind since when I saw in that episode on 'Ghost Whisperer'. Btw, just to clarify, it's two scenes... (just in case you are an avid ghost whisperer fan and you happen to know every detail). It is lousy, I won't deny, and I know that. Why did I write it? It was all because the title came to my mind while i was in bed at a hotel on a blue blue monday with overcast skies. Thank you for reading, and it would be really kind of you to review it (:
CRITICISMS ARE MOST WELCOMED (as it is too for ALL other poems, unless otherwise stated) | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Thu Dec 08, 2011 2:43 am | |
| Hi everyone Finally, my O level's are done and I'm free of hell month (oughta right a poem about that ) How have you guys been?? | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Dec 09, 2011 7:18 pm | |
| great! can see how much I've spammed there! quite a few new poems up on this thread.
anyways, how do you think you'll fair? I hope to do extremely well. (:
I'm loosing my creative genes i stopped after writing those. I haven't really had much to write about... I guess I just have to try!
Roller Coaster
Swerve! Twist! Scream! There's no fun if any is missed, Fear is the best friend of fun!
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Dec 09, 2011 7:23 pm | |
| Languages -Dreamer
Buy 'em all! Buy 'em all! Dictionaries, thesauruses and guides, yet to begin is gruesomely tough!
Terms incoherently placed, words jumbled and translated, how did I came to learn them all?
First, second, third, and more, I wish I can master all in just a blink of mine eye!
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Fri Dec 09, 2011 7:32 pm | |
| [empty] -Dreamer
Fountains of inspirations shrivelling dreams
Rivers of creations dried up hopes
Oasis of desires, despairing sights.
Sea of possibilities sunken lives.
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sun Dec 11, 2011 5:50 am | |
| You did not lose your creative gene! I also detected an edge of fun in your poems! They sounded more carefree and bubbly! Does this have to do with your O'levels ending?? ~grins~
By the way, I have been reading this book (a compilation of short stories and poems) and dang, the poems are sooooooooooooo awesome!!!!!! I desire to be like the author! | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Tue Dec 13, 2011 8:19 am | |
| Beats me lol!
Could be, but I am still a little overwhelmed by emotions. Idk what I want or where I am going and I feel a complete mess... It's like I'll never reach what I want. Though so, it is because of this, all the more I want to achieve them... To prove... Prove... Prove myself wrong? No idea what i'm doing but I feel like an abyss so deep and empty that I can pour endless stuff into it! Ahhh~ what's going on)??!! | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Wed Dec 14, 2011 3:20 am | |
| ECP-DreamerBy the roads and through the forests, I've ran past all the coloured landscape of the longest stretch of beach here. So did I stop and so did I rest, take a pause on the jetty, watching leisure fishermens! Sea it is, so dark and rolling deep, ocean it is, so wide and boundlessly vast, water it is, so clear and visible from above! I await and do I anticipate, to find a time to dip beneath, gazing skyward from under the surface. A/N: Info on ECP | |
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natshane High Priestess
Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : In a deep deep hole....
Character sheet Name: Adrianna Age: 16 Affinity: Hobby: Writing
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Thu Dec 15, 2011 7:08 am | |
| Poem update : It gives me the impression of a chinese idiom I once read! See, I see optimism in your poems these days, they ARE more carefree:D And I don't think you're proving yourself wrong, perhaps there is a minor obstacle in you achieving your dream, however, you're more driven to achieve success, that's what I interpret from your poems:) It doesn't sound dark:) | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:11 am | |
| Maybe? I really don't know. I have two songs to share, but i'll post them up separately. Hope you can take time to review the second. The first is just a rant. ahha >< Some Trust, Some Love
I'm over sixteen and I'm here tearing over loneliness that you'll never know You say you're my parents, but it feels so far I love you so much (so much), but you don't seem to see Always trying ot hurt me, always making me angry almost never trying to understand me
I wish to get my first paycheck and to give you a share to let you rely on me to let you know you've brought me up well Do you know how much I year to make you proud?
But you don't know my heart you don't give a damn about all these piling hopes
It's only for you my greatest dream is to make you genuinely proud but do you see it? But do you see it~?
I've lived sixteen years under our care I hope that you will see through my eyes give me a little more of your belief and let me know the real world out there... Know my true heart's desire and feel my love to you...
Yet you think I'm just a young tendril trying to battle throug hte scorching drought pushing aside all your rings of dried up leaves But you don't seem to see... All the effort I put in but you don't seem bothered... about my holistic development... Do you know how much I yearn to make you proud? Oh
But you don't know my heart you don't give a damn about all these piling hopes
It's only for you my greatest dream is to make you genuinely proud but do you see it? But do you see it~?
~Instrumental Interlude~
But you don't know my heart you don't give a damn about all these piling hopes
It's only for you my greatest dream is to make you genuinely proud but do you see it? But do you see it~?
Because I love you so I have hurt my soul I'm at my life's new low.
It's only for you my number one dream is to make you genuinely proud... But why do you deny it? But why do you deny me so~?
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:12 am | |
| New Now
Leave me alone in my woes don't bother me any longer I am sane enough to control need not your tormenting concern
I don't care how much you love me cause after all these bitter years I know... I know better to not to Cause~
It hurts me too much it pains me too far I dare not close my eyes don't wanna leave this world Just like this Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark I have to let you go just wanna live on with life... Just this way...
Unsure what you think 'f me, can't care less for it anyway I, me, mine, you, yours, ours, life nothing you do harms me anymore
Fialing arms, waverin' hearts no more of all that from today they can never wound me again-- Cause~
It hurts me too much it pains me too far I dare not close my eyes don't wanna leave this world Just like this Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark I have to let you go just wanna live on with life... Just this way...Without you...
~Instrumental Interlude~
Did you think I would turn back return to your side and hold you in my arms with sacred tears flowing down my checks?
Did you think I would stop in my tracks when I hear your voice in a dead-man's alley as if in hallicination?
No more of the pain, no more to be gained all's lost in dust, all's gone and rust won't think a second more of the aftermath that wore, I won't have myself wearing my youthful wealth, bound and chained to this pitiful life. Cause~
It hurts me too much it pains me too far I dare not close my eyes don't wanna leave this world Just like this Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark I have to let you go just wanna live on with life... Just this way...
~Short instrumental interlude~
It's too much for me it's too far for us I dare not think so high don't wanna be locked behind Just like this Oh~
You shouldn't have came we should have just brushed passed shoulder to shoulder, presence to each other unaware~
[Lets' live life from now... Just like that...] (those kind of echo-like ending) | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:03 am | |
| Currently in the midst of editing the lyrics and coming up with the piano score. One hand only. LH in cords. (I'm lazy) | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:24 am | |
| Can't You -Dreamer
Leave me alone, let me be. Stop bothering, quit caring. It's not like I'm dying, or unable to do these. Able-bodied, sane mind, stop acting like you're all so nice. I've had my share, and you yours too, lets' just end it here, and forget it ever begun. We were not made to be, and never in the future too. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:27 am | |
| Edited:
New Now -Dreamer
Leave me alone in my woes don't bother me anymore I am sane enough to control need not your tormenting concern
I don't care how much you love cause after all these years I know better to not to Cause~
(Chorus) It hurts me too much it pains me too far I dare not close my eyes don't wanna leave this world Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark I have to let you go just wanna live on with life... Just this way
Unsure what you think of me, can't care less for it anyway I,me,mine,you,yours, ours, life, nothing you will harm me more
Fialing arms, waverin' hearts no more of all that from today they can never wound me again Cause~
It hurts me too much it pains me too far I dare not close my eyes don't wanna leave this world Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark I have to let you go just wanna live on with life... Just this way... Without you...
~Instrumental Interlude~
No more of the pain, no more to be gained all is lost in dust, all is gone and rust won't think anymore of the heart and core can't have myself wearing youthful wealth Cause~
It hurts me too much it pains me too far I dare not close my eyes don't wanna leave this world Oh~
You can't leave a mark have to let you go just wanna live on with life... Just this way
~Short instrumental interlude~
It's too much for me it's too far for us don't wanna be left behind Oh~
You shouldn't have came we should've just brushed passed shoulder to shoulder, presence to each other unaware~
[Lets' live life from now... Just like this...] | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:09 am | |
| Red
Red, as striking as neon signs marks the beginning of love. Kisses, wines, and affection, the blood raises through its stream.
Red, as searing as 'STOP' signs marks the halt and end of it all. Romance, roses, and rubies, All's the same colour in love and war. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:10 am | |
| 24 colours Hatsukoi no Palette
Splashes of colours on a blank canvas as our lives entwined Spreading and permeating the surface as we come closer
A/N: Have you read that manga before? I think it's short, but it's really sweet. A little of a cliff-hanger. I hope the next volume will come soon. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Wed Dec 28, 2011 1:10 am | |
| Different
Pretty girl heart of gold Pretty soul In need of love
Unlike me came a dictator Yet i'm here Feeling a whole new world.
Our meeting was planned by God Our interests were perfectly matched
I can feel myself changing moving to this tune loving this new life
Coming together right now wanting to know more digging deeper down
It feels good to be with you. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Wed Dec 28, 2011 1:10 am | |
| Start Today
The havens dictated you to come and suffer through From windows have smiles flew To you, You life is all screwed
But think again dear friend you do get enough food Even in the bleak darkness there must be some good
So just move on from today start a fresh page every day Don't care, just think of a way to keep grievance by the bay
Some day God will send a man to lead you to another land so don't worry, just take my hand never should you stop and stand
Try not to review your past imagine a better tomorrow Best not to dig up rusts grab every minute, don't let it go.
Battle all the dark and bane pick yourself up when you fall There's a rainbow after rain Even you can break the walls
So just move on from today start a fresh page every day Don't care, just think of a way to keep grievance by the bay
Some day God will send a man to lead you to another land so don't worry, just take my hand never should you stop and stand
[Bridge] You may not have much but you have life It can be a painful march but you can strife
So just move on from today start a fresh page every day Don't care, just think of a way to keep grievance by the bay
Some day God will send a man to lead you to another land so don't worry, just take my hand never should you stop and stand
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Wed Dec 28, 2011 10:24 pm | |
| yes yes, long and tedious to red, AGAIN. I've been inspired to write songs recently. Sorry that it's tiring on your eyes! Lynn
Even though I don't really know why you would help me so but since we're in this now your hand I'll take and follow
Although I still tear for history imagining all that could have been I won't want to go back in because I have you with me
Even when darkness comes around the fear that once would bound has all vanished to the ground because it's you I have found
Back then I was just too young didn't think you were true when we bunk believing its only words from the tongue nothing much really rung
Until today I finally do see what all these were meant to be It's like you gave me a key and we became best buddies
[Bridge] Just a random paper of written words but is enough to soothe the hurt Just a short mail about a day you lived yet it reads to me so massive...
Back then I was just too young didn't think you were true when we bunk believing its only words from the tongue nothing much really rung
Until today I finally do see what all these were meant to be It's like you gave me a key and we became best buddies
So even if we end up in different places and we are bound to meet new faces I will never forget your traces because you brought forth changes
And I hope we can stay friends forever I don't want to loose you ever you really made me so much better with you, nothing can seem bitter
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*~Dreamer~* Losing Two Friends
Join date : 2009-06-16 Location : somewhere behind a computer screen ><
Character sheet Name: Dreamer (Left); Sky (Right) Age: 18/15 Affinity: Power Tapping and Invisibility (both)
| Subject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:27 am | |
| Speak Not
New wants greet fresh dreams old ones wear away all speak of only hopes to everyone near
Stop to ponder as evening draw close one one one two ending soon
What for the idle breaths when spoken desires dwindle actual actions? | |
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