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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 17, 2010 5:55 am

You're been to China? I study Chinese History but I never heard of that river, haha. Thanks for telling me that:)

Oh really? But my poem kinda sucked, haha. Keep trying!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Sat Dec 18, 2010 5:11 am

Yea. quite a lot i've not written about... but I'm trying hard to fill in the gaps and keep the memory.

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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Sat Dec 18, 2010 5:19 am

update (dk if i've posted this before):

Brooding Session

A place bustled with people,
all the faces of tourists
smiling ever so bright.

Yet the many hearts of souls,
they lie dead on the floor,
shredded, shattered and shunned.

Even the spring of life,
and the season of revival,
brings not any enthusiasm.

Entertainment and attractions,
chattering and amusements,
lifts but only facial muscles.

Coats of dust covers over,
stagnant and everlasting,
or maybe forgotten by all?
~Ger.

What Should We Do?

Blunt words crack bones,
and sharp truths bleeds souls,
yet stark bleakness clouds over,
when knives are brilliantly wrapped,
and despise and anger settles,
when silence distances ties.
~Ger.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Mon Dec 20, 2010 4:32 am

Brooding session: I know you're describing a whole other situation but I could connect this poem with this year's Christmas (in my place) Sad It's like a forgotten tradition, I mean there's not much atmosphere as always, and quote 'or maybe forgotten by all?' That seemed to be the feeling right now....

What should we do: Brilliant! As always, your poems are short yet direct:)
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:50 pm

I was talking about the pit of a thousand in Nan Jing (China). In memory of the NanJing Massacre. I saw how China people going in to see and taking photoes (maybe they are taiwanese, but aren't they still a part of china too?). They were like 'hey, take a picture of me here! against the sun' when it is such a solemn place to be at.

i wanted to write about a reflection on a song, but ended up writing about friendship.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Wed Dec 22, 2010 5:48 am

Now I can see how it connects to your poem and truth be told that it's brilliant, I know Nan Jing and it surprises me that you know a lot about China too:)

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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:32 am

I went for an immersion to china, it was quite a long stay, but it taught me a lot.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:33 am

Wow, that must be a good experience for you.
Btw, Merry Christmas:)
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:35 am

yeah, merry christmas to you too! I have so much to write about. and i've yet to update my poems.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:42 am

I'll be there to read it:)

Happy New Year too:)!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:48 am

you can't be 'there' because i'm writing it at home haha.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:17 am

Haha, then I'll be here XD
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:59 am

Everlasting Unfairness

Fruitless trees,
unpaid work,
buried gem,
no one knows.

Only scorned,
uncared for,
loneliness,
disparaged.

forking route,
we all take,
yet there're some,
left behind.

Just like it,
Struggling,
to surface,
but ignored.

But this is,
just a part,
of our lives,
we can't hide.
~Ger.

--This was just a random poem i conjured up. Some people don't need to work hard but they get everything they want and they score so well... but there are others who simply work around the clock, but get nothing out of the efforts they've put in.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Sat Dec 25, 2010 4:52 am

It very well potrayed what you want to point out but I think the poem is not that smooth flowing, nevertheless, it's a good one and the last stanza is my favourite.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Sat Dec 25, 2010 7:51 am

yeah. it wasn't really thought through... it was written when i was having a block. everything was a blank so i just squeezed words out of the thin air. so it sounds so awkward and the syllable rhyme was terribly done.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Sat Dec 25, 2010 7:53 am

I'll be writing more in time to come... with this stupid block goes away.... trust me, by end of next year, i will have loads more up. esp the end of next year. because i'm having my school leaving exam so i won't have much time to bother about clearing blocks. i will write though if something comes to me. but it will be scarce. you'll see me flood this thread with updates by early december next year. right now, i'd like it to be understood as the 'suspense' mode. ><

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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:31 am

No worries! Apparently I'm 'suffering' from a lack of inspiration as well! I'm starting school again soon so I wouldn't have much time to write or surf the net anyways. I will look forward to reading yours again:) And I'll be 'here' to read them, haha.

You've wrote better poems so you will be able to 'chase away' the block anytime soon XD Don't stress yourself too much though. Good luck!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Mon Dec 27, 2010 7:12 am

Chase Away

A shadow at midnight,
with no solid frame in sight.
the only figure behind the light,
a growing trail follows it tight.

A little child thought it rare,
stops to ponder and stare.
'Momo, what's that there?'
he pointed where 'twas bare.

A soundless footprint was getting near,
as wind began to blow harder,
'Momo, it's coming here.'
perpetual fear gripping him.

A single shrill that broke the still,
the outline of the image devoured its kill.
There was nothing mother could do,
as she ran with despair that grew.
~Ger.

--Another poem that is squeezed out... The rhyme is so forced. ew

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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Mon Dec 27, 2010 8:09 am

I think it's great, better than before actually. But I think it would be better if you would just elaborate the mother's despair, her turmoil and her suffering. I'm not a great critic, so pardon me if I offended you somehow:) I always read poems as if I was reading a story, and I always craved for an 'epilogue' to a story, if you get what I meant, haha.

Honestly, it was a great poem, you found it again! Haha
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:23 pm

I do get what you mean, but i screwed up my idea completely. I didn't meant for it to be like this... I wanted it to be a nightmare of something along that line, but it ended becoming some spiritual thing. >>
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:00 am

[Don't blame me if i've posted this before, i'm too lazy to check if i did. ><]

Perceptional Sophistication

Duels of power,
covert and secrete.
Capsules of protection,
built and bolstered.

Fables of friendships,
bristle and prick.
Tables of chimeras,
shatter and pop.

Dimples of history,
shallow and tarnished.
Candles of alliance,
dissolves and melt.

Girdles of living,
cumbersome and woeful.
Barrels of loneliness,
tumble and crush.
~Ger.



People Change

You told me once,
that rain was a gift,
the best blessing from God.

A grace from him,
we often neglect,
but left refreshing sesations.

So vivid to me,
the virtue of your smile,
as you sung your love for rain.

So clear that scene,
where you dance and twirled,
in the shower of droplets.

Yet in today's rain,
you walked, but with a shade,
pacing yourself to a place called home.

You said yourself,
that rain was your home,
a place you could not live without.

If it was an endow,
and you deared it so,
why did you try to hide from it this time?
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:12 am

I didn't feel the first one.
But the second is my all time fav of yours, Ger! I absolutely love it...Except for one thing in the second stanza:
sensation is spelled wrong.
(i love rain) xD
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:44 am

I wrote it on a rainy day. Alright, it's more than just raining, almost like some sort of hurricane. The wind was howling, it was so strong it shut the windows completely.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:28 am

The second one is also my fav, it's very...soulful, haha, probably because I'm a big one rainy days, rainy days are my most inspirational moments. The fifth stanza is my fav in the whole poem, it's stating something simple, that the persona had walked through the rain with a shade, but at the same time it meant that the persona was leaving his/her home <<< my pov. I love it so much!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:31 pm

Actually, it doesn't matter if you put the 'my pov' or not. Because no matter what you write, it's your understanding of the poem, not the poets intention (sometimes it can be, but it won't be exactly the same). So.. yeah... It's okay to just write what you think, there's no need for the 'my pov'.

Thanks Very Happy
It's one of my favorite too >< Because to me me, it spoke so much about the beauty of rain, and also about how fast the world is changing and moving on... how easily old friends can be replaced and forgotten... how easy people can enter and exit our lives.
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