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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Wed Dec 29, 2010 8:09 pm

*~Dreamer~* wrote:
Actually, it doesn't matter if you put the 'my pov' or not. Because no matter what you write, it's your understanding of the poem, not the poets intention (sometimes it can be, but it won't be exactly the same). So.. yeah... It's okay to just write what you think, there's no need for the 'my pov'.

That's how I feel too! (as you can tel from my first poem on my new thread lol)
Kind of ironic. Now it's happened to you Two different opinions different than your own on ur poem. *coolness*

Expecting more soon! E[=
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Thu Dec 30, 2010 1:32 am

tee-hee ><
But i don't have much atm. block.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Thu Dec 30, 2010 2:05 am

Ahh we all have it! Just don't neglect your duties like I do! lol
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:02 am

lol....I'm afraid that I'll offend someone you see, that's why I put the my POV thingy, anyways, as my teacher always said, there are no right or wrong answers, lol.

Block again?
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:35 am

yeah... actually i have been having block for quite some time... mostly because my emotions are overwhelming and it's difficult to pen it down in words... it sounds like a repetition no matter how i phrase it. The emotions that overlap seem to be the same emotions that i've experienced before or wrote about before. so yeah D: <

Over-Idolizing

Admire or desire,
crush or love,
confusion or jealousy,
dream or reality?

Sometimes it's just all

Craving to meet you,
hoping to be near thee,
yet behind this screen,
I know I'm too far.

Or maybe I'm just too normal.

You are a star,
standing above the crowd,
whereas I'm just,
one of the many fans.

Standing in the sea of faces,
only hopping to be seen.


But it's all okay,
even if I can't get you today,
for years down the road,
I will stand above all.

And you'll be the one gapping,
as I touch the world of hearts.


I will not stay stationary,
and continue my journey,
forgetting you ever existed,
and working to be on top of the world.

I will not be worse off than you.
~Ger.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:43 am

Over Idolizing- man, this is a bomb! First of all, this is a poem which I think lot of people could relate to. It has an edge to it you know? Firts the persona is desperate then he/she wanted to move on, the transition from being so tight into a determined person was written perfectly, and the idea of putting a 'verse' (a line I mean) in between stanzas has quite a great effect!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:50 am

Thanks. Well.. I think I'm in such a case... My idol is only a few years older than me. So it could be just idolizing... wait what's idolizing? Isn't the same thing as falling in love with a star? But why is it idolizing? Is it because we can't bring ourselves to admit that we're in love with the star? Finding excuses (like we always do) for something so normal? It's not wrong to fall in love with someone. It doesn't matter what position they are in the world, they're all just humans. If we all say we're idolizing, who can they love? Who can be loving them? Other stars? But stars, they are just people like us, who worked hard and produced something that could bring them up in the world.

Okay, so put it simply, i don't know whether i'm loving the star or just admiring his skills. Okay, not rlly skills he's just hot ><
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:06 am

[Alright, this is an update... can't really say it is because i t's just posting up some works i've made ages ago]

Going Solo

Bitter pills only swallowed,
silent resentments just held back,
none will see what's covered.
Beneath this masquerade of plastered smiles,
I am but a tempered, tattered doll.

Utilized by the faces known as friends,
having marks leeched from clenched fists,
frustrations are exceeding limits.
Under this layer of insane exterior,
I am but an alone, afraid soul.

Angsty that penetrates beings,
lost in a abyss of clashing emotions,
fury that can only burst veins under this skin.
Behind this expressionless mask,
I am but a haywired, erratic living.

Invitations to a black parade,
faces of perplexed expressions,
just another piece to add to their trash.
Outside this intricate mind,
I am but a forgotten, behind the scenes helper.
~Ger.
[I would greatly appreciate if there's no flame for this... Because every part of this is real. And it's not just a true story, it's MY true story. I don't mind if you flame on others, but please be lighter on this. If you intended to char me, please just burn. Thank you in advance]

Erik's Heartache

Promised you'll always love me,
Said I'm the only one you see,
but your love's only that of a pea.

You tore me into shreds,
left me hanging by a thread,
ignoring the tears I've shed.

My soul that's all worn,
my heart that's all torn,
Stuck in this life I mourn.

You'll never see my tears
You'll never know my fears
I'm counting down the years.
~Ger.
[Shows how much i loved HoN last time]


Love Yourself More

Within a distance,
in the haze,
a certain shadow,
lingers in this maze.

Coming to halt,
juncture of many ways,
which to choose,
or should I just stay?

Desires branching dreams,
just a lost wounded soul,
struggling to surface,
trying to reach the goal.

Always too far the grasp,
often distantly close,
it's time to choose,
into dreams or out of mist?

Hopes that lay far ahead,
reality that's catching up,
if no move is made,
it's only 'fall into warp'.

Only when you can,
help a friend in need,
if it's so depressing,
then no point of the deed.

Pushing pessimism,
forcing happiness,
always hurting oneself,
when patching others..

No more optimism,
goodbye affection,
no point loving others,
so why pay their pension?

But is it that difficult,
is it only a waste of time,
to ask an empty hole,
to just love itself more?
~Ger.
[This is a messy poem. I never found out how too make it smoother. Would be good if you all could give some constructive comments (:]
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:17 am

*~Dreamer~* wrote:
Thanks. Well.. I think I'm in such a case... My idol is only a few years older than me. So it could be just idolizing... wait what's idolizing? Isn't the same thing as falling in love with a star? But why is it idolizing? Is it because we can't bring ourselves to admit that we're in love with the star? Finding excuses (like we always do) for something so normal? It's not wrong to fall in love with someone. It doesn't matter what position they are in the world, they're all just humans. If we all say we're idolizing, who can they love? Who can be loving them? Other stars? But stars, they are just people like us, who worked hard and produced something that could bring them up in the world.

Okay, so put it simply, i don't know whether i'm loving the star or just admiring his skills. Okay, not rlly skills he's just hot ><


*sigh* I haven't had a crush like that yet...Or at least that's what I consider idolizing to be.
Have you read my comment on the other forum? I'll paste it here:

I think you put a lot of heart into this, Ger. I can really tell.

That's it. But it really says it all. And that was before I read this,. I love how you poor your feelings into your pen and let it flow. It's so amazing how well you express yourself with your poems. It's a gift; embrace it.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:28 am

Haha, to put it into words and to rationalize everything is simple, but to actually believe it, well that's hard. I don't think you should put love, since you don't know him. Admiring or liking would be a better word. As for loving his skills, I don't defy that Wink

Idolizing is more like an infatuatiuon with someone, loving somehow goes deeper than that. Yes, love is without condition, but I don't think you can really love a star if it's just based on what you know, find out online. You have to really connect to a person to really feel the love. Love is a powerful word but sometimes it's sorta overated, I use the world all the time, but do I really mean it? That's the question;) Sometimes you will feel connected with an idol through songs, I did and I admit that, I love the song, I love the singer, I could feel the singer pours his heart and soul into that particulay melody, but what if it's all just an act? For publicity? LOL
I'm rambling nonsense am I? Which I am pretty sure has little to do with your poem XDDDD!

Btw, first impression is important ~winks~ so the hotter the better, XD
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:40 am

haha. actually i've realized singers i like aren't the type ppl my age likes. i look at their voices and skills before their looks somehow. ><
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:44 am

That did work with me, I love um soulful singers, XD
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:54 am

idk i love japanese singers and actors somehow... they are really just super cool... maybe not them, but i like japanese itself. ><
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:57 am

Haha! The wink adds character. I can see wear ur coming from. We use love so often that the word is a cliche with no meaning.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 3:02 am

Somehow I moved on, I was so obsessed with them before, like whatever I do it's something japs-related. But I don't know, I moved on I guess. But i missed the old days when I sat down in front of the TV 24 hours watching anime or listening to jap songs. My friends are more to Korean.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 3:08 am

OH YES. Korean is so overrated >>

I mean it's not that good at all! I'd prefer Jap songs >< (contradiction contradiction: I'll be watching the prize presentation for the korean star awards later) ><
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 3:29 am

In America, it's really weird to be interested in other languages and stuff. Lol I stick out like a sore thumb.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 3:42 am

well being the only one gives you a higher chance of being the leader ><
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:27 am

haha, you do have some point there;)

But I don't see any problem learning an additional language.
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:51 am

Nor do I >< And i wish i can learn more. the more the merrier~><
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:54 am

LOL.

Yeah, I want to learn
Spanish
French
Japanese
Thai
German
Danish
Irish
um, a whole lot more? XD
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:00 am

GASP.

I think i'll just take french, italian, japanese and korean for now... because i've loads of instruments i want to learn too XD
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:02 am

Don't even let me start on instruments ;p
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:05 am

haha. i want to learn piano after i'm done with piano. then drums, THEN i want to learn dancing!!! ><
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry   Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:08 am

I dance, and I'm learning the guitar. XD
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