My Poems

Shining like a star,
Hiding in the light like the moon.
Heart pounding,
Palms sweating.
A click is heard,
a rustling sound follows.
Blinking back tears,
sniffling slightly.
No going back now,
The first word was written.
I must continue,
no going back.
Words hiding in the brain,
turth in the heart.
No lies written,
justthe cold truth.

Maybe you could elaborate a little and make them into stanzas so that they don't appear like a who chunk of random lines?

Btw, I don't quite get the part about first word was written. It didn't seem to relate to anything...Although I do get a brief idea that some sort of connection is gone.