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!lunerflower!
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 |  Subject: Anne's trys at Poetry..  Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:43 pm | |
| Well even though I'm no poetic person, I lately have had a inspiration of all your poems, so I decided to create some of my own.
Truthfully I don't even think half of the ones I will post are even poems, but we'll see..
Please comment and post what you think!
>.>
By the way, most of these do NOT have titles.
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:49 pm | |
| He said he liked me
I expected he did
He said he would ask
I expected too much
He said he'll keep my heart in care
I believed him
Though he said and said
It never came to be
For he stepped by my side
But never even looked at me | |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:53 pm | |
| I gave you my heart
You ripped it in threads
things would be different
If you just gave me a chance
No I don't believe things ended well
I think of you constantly
you don't even consider me
I'd break your heart
Like you did to me
But I don't have a heart
To do it with
Because you took it away from me
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:57 pm | |
| I show no feelings
The person inside is hidden
My body is the shell for a gracious creature inside
Well the creature ever reveal
What was once then is no more
The creature inside is no more
Feelings inside me are no more
The being is no more | |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:09 pm | |
| Reality
I always help to wonder
How life would be different
If you asked me would things be different
My motto is the IF in life
But is their really even a if
Are their possibilities beyond this
Is their really any hope
Life is a written story lead by you
If you rip it up it will dissolve
You will disappear into nothing more than dust
No one will miss you
Not even shed a tear for you
Because that's how cruel people are
This is the reality of life | |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Feb 20, 2010 6:00 pm | |
| *These were all made yesterday February 19, 2010*
If you read these, please comment what you think!!
Thnx. Anne. | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Feb 20, 2010 7:57 pm | |
| Anne these are amazing! They really sing to the reader and are so full of emotions. Please write more! |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:27 am | |
| Aw! Thnx.I'm gonna try to wright some more=]
Currently I have three more but their not finished :/ | |
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calico
Admin - Poet Laureate
Join date : 2009-06-15
Location : Southern California, USA
| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Wed Feb 24, 2010 12:12 pm | |
| these are beautiful! I can't wait to read more of your work. | |
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Zoey
Attending my First Vamp. Class
Join date : 2009-12-29
Location : somewhere under water
| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:21 pm | |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:03 pm | |
| Thank You. >.<
*no title*
I shall be relieved of my worries
I shall feel no pain
I feel the burden within me is now being released
I bury the pain and sorrows into the pit of the past
I run in fury passing the loneliness that comes by
Making each step a sign of emotion
I let life go as it comes
Not hanging on to it, but just hanging on to the present
Because things are different now
Things around me are different
The world is changing
And I am changing right beside it
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:40 pm | |
| The colors within it
sparkling in every direction
blinding u with its beautiful-ness
created by the wonders of above
it gives us joy when we are down
we forget what brings us uncertainty
and see the beauty of something as simple as this
we dream of going high and touching the sky
and of other impossible things
but we stand tall and still believe
in the beauty that surrounds us
for we are still here and see beauty beyond sight
so share it with others and keep it in mind
(^^I was writing about a rainbow but then I some what switched topic to just nature.. So the topic I am writing about is nature.)
March - 7 - 2010 | |
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Zoey
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:10 pm | |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:44 pm | |
| Nobody
Are you a nobody?
well you shouldn't be
for you are not
you are a person with feelings of any other
you are a regular being stepping out from the crowd
don't be embarrassed
let out how you truly feel
this is you
not him or her
just you
be proud of the way you are
don't let others put your head down
you have a head and a soul so show who you are
being ashamed is no good
let the beautiful person walk out of its shell
and out of the crowd you stick out
for you are not like others
you are unique
you are you
for that is what matters the most
I felt bad for kids who are afraid of what others think and this suddenly popped in and I starting typing :]
Thx.=]
3-10-10 | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Thu Mar 11, 2010 1:32 pm | |
| thats really cute, and quit touching. Nice work Anne |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:23 pm | |
| Okay new poem..
Times are tough
Don't make a fuss
We've all been though this before
Say it now
Before its too late
Because by then
Its too late to even think
So tell me
What I need to hear
I'll listen with care
I'll keep it in mind
I will not forget
So tell me now before its too late
Before I go
And make a fuss
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:30 am | |
| OK more poetry..
The Inside
You mean nothing more but a pile of stones
People act like they care
But they really don't
When will this tragic life go?
Nobody cares to know
You walk by unknown
Hidden in a body people know
People like whats on the outside
But don't bother the person inside
They just care for the looks
Not for the beautiful personality inside
Where things should matter
Where things are nonexistent
Where things change
Where things are left alone
Where souls reep in loneliness
Where my heart shatters the most | |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:42 am | |
| Truth
I hide my inner feelings from the ones I care for
Secretly I am a depressed girl
Forced to live day by day
Minute by minute
Failing at life's challenges
Caring for the dear life
Yet the same time
Hating it
I would cry my heart out
But I choose to show a happy feeling instead
For I am at least a considerate person
Who considers to be nice to others
Some let others burn in flames for all they care
This is the truth of reality
The painful truth
I am forced to live with day by day
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:52 am | |
| The Real You
Thanks for letting me down
You really crushed my heart
You punched a hole in my heart that cannot be fixed
I'd let you step on it but I already did
It is something that cannot be toyed with
By something horrible lke you
You expect a new toy every week
But not this time
Now you walk a dark road by yourself
You walk a road of flames
Followed by death
Be sure your proud
Because everyone is watching
The cruel person you are
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:59 am | |
| You
I saw the light in your eyes
The true you
The person you really are
The beauty of one that no one else can capture
Just you
For you are unique in your own ways
You could capture the attention of others if wanted
You are different in what no one else has
You have captured eyes in ways that are indescribable
You make your own decisions like some one should
You are incredible
You are my life
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Mar 13, 2010 12:04 pm | |
| Life
Why does t have to be difficult?
Why is it disaster after disaster?
Whatever shall his lead to?
Is life a waste of my time?
Questions without answers is all I get
Does Lord feed on my depression?
Do people know I am alive?
No encouragement can help this
This creature made to suffer
How long shall I continue to live?
Where only looks seem to matter
Where uglies strive on depression
Where my friends are puppets
Things are difficult
But do they come through?
Life has many questions and answers
Will they ever be answered
Am I ever going to be answered?
3/12/10 | |
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!lunerflower!
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| | Subject: Re: Anne's trys at Poetry.. Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:19 pm | |
| Love
Love is something deep and fair
It gives me pleasure to spare
I see it day and night
outside an inside the heart
daily findings
and daily losses
some last
some don't
some make it a year
without shedding a tear
some go through a night
without making a fight
so point be
lets share our spare
and let ours go through the most | |
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